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Critique by ~andynortonuk 1 week, 5 days ago
The use of a limited palette is applied successfully on this page of your comic. The shading works well, showing depth and volume to the characters' precise on the page. The panelling is simple, but laid out well so that there it makes a cohesive sequence for the reader.
Whilst the monochrome palette may look good to get a good impression on the characters in this comic, but it does mean that there is a risk of losing some of the detail applied into the character design. It might take a second glance to register that the snake is wrapped around the character, because it blends into the character too well.
Apart from that colouring critique, it makes a good impression and it does make me want to read the rest of the comic out.
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*Ms--Usagi Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
♥
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:iconzachsanomaly:
=ZachsAnomaly Dec 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
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~FangedTiger13 Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww his mama gives him kisses. It's a good distraction to the blood on her face. Plus, Hawk is a mama's boy so.
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:iconzachsanomaly:
=ZachsAnomaly Dec 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
    She loves her giant baby.
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~FangedTiger13 Dec 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I can tell. And he loves her, especially those mushy mama kisses.
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~FangedTiger13 Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Also, completely inappropriate, but, THAT ASS.
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~OkamiArtist Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondatass: XD!!
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~FangedTiger13 Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
sexah
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~OkamiArtist Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
indeed
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~FangedTiger13 Dec 7, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
im sad but i'll tell you elsewhere
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